14 comments on “Your Hidden Pieces

  1. Dust to dust
    Ashes to ashes
    A ghost still haunts my past

    From place to place
    Your touch in flashes
    Like fire that will not last

    Please stop, my love
    My love is no more
    Your flame just hurts me so-

    I’m sorry I left-
    But was it a theft
    For you to punish my soul?

    I just got it while reading this and it gave me shivers all down my spine! Thankyouthankyouthankyou!

    I mean, it’s sad and beautiful and it hurts, but it’s- good! Thank you for writing such hauntingly awesome poetry, please don’t stop writing. <3

    <3's,
    -Eris

    PS:
    AIEE! GHOSTS!
    On a more serious level, that's scary! :/
    I get scared when I have to sleep with the light off! I can't imagine having weird stuff like that all happening at once. I wonder if he meant to set off the fire alarms or if that just happened when his ghostly presence flew past them? it is a mystery.

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  2. Your poem is beautiful!! Thank you for writing that… it gave me the shivers.
    I am not sure of what to think of the fire alarms, but for them to go off in three rooms, one after another is just plain odd. It didn’t make sense in the least.
    I have several other experiences with him that I shall write about but I must say that the most haunting to me was the hidden notes… he know he was leaving this world…he knew I would find them. Also, I would smell his cologne all the time. Like he was sitting right beside me. That only occurred when I was alone.
    Very chilling. ♥

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  3. Wow, that’s really amazing and yes, that does give me the chills as well. Maybe the alarms are a supernatural sign to remember the beauty of the past rather than the grief of what is lost which is also triggered by the scent of his cologne.

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