A Poetic Memoir Of My Journey Through Life

Did you ?


Did angels fall, one by one,

                            from the sky?

Or have the stars, each its own,

      stop twinkling in your eyes?

   Did the moon, in its soft glow,

                        fail to bring peace?

Did the calmness of night, so fair,

                  bring you to your knees?

Did you whisper of forever, not yours,

           under moon beams and twinkles.

Did you promise your heart, treacherous,

                                  not seeing that it is fickle?

                                                                    Did you?

© bipolarmuse 2012

17 Responses

  1. HI SWEETEHEART …..
    THERE IS A REALLY IMAGINATIVE LADY NAMED ANETTE – FROM “INK ”
    SHE IS DOING THIS THING FOR POETS ON SUNDAYS ……… :) JUST THOUGHT MAYBE YOU’D LIKE IT ……..
    XX
    HERE IS HER INFO ….
    http://anettehermann.wordpress.com/2012/05/20/this-is-a-public-announcement/
    LOVE XO CAT

    May 20, 2012 at 1:34 PM

    • I will check this out!! I didn’t get it until just now. :( Good ol Monday morning. LOL

      May 21, 2012 at 6:25 AM

  2. I really liked this one!

    May 20, 2012 at 3:36 PM

    • Thank you Edward! I like it too… it has a different feeling to it. My inspiration for it was all over the place… and some reference to myself.

      May 21, 2012 at 6:24 AM

      • I really like the ones that come from everywhere

        May 21, 2012 at 9:05 AM

  3. Fantastic!

    May 20, 2012 at 4:41 PM

  4. I like this one alot…

    May 20, 2012 at 5:43 PM

    • Thank you… it has a different feeling to it doesn’t it??

      May 21, 2012 at 6:23 AM

  5. Wonderfull Poem!!!
    Very very nice! :)
    One kiss by my hearth ♥
    Hi
    Claude

    May 21, 2012 at 10:46 PM

    • Thank you Claude! I am glad that you enjoyed this poem. I really like it myself. ♥

      May 22, 2012 at 6:52 AM

  6. Woah.. Great work here Muse. Really, really enjoyed it!

    May 22, 2012 at 2:08 PM

    • Thank tpg! A little different than my norm… I love it.

      May 22, 2012 at 3:24 PM

  7. Reblogged this on onlinefunland.

    May 24, 2012 at 7:48 AM

  8. This is very pretty.

    May 24, 2012 at 9:01 AM

    • Thank you very much. :)

      May 24, 2012 at 9:03 AM

      • You’re welcome :)

        May 24, 2012 at 9:05 AM

  9. Pingback: List of Poems « bipolarmuse

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