When I Fell
When I fell, you observed…
with weary melancholic eyes
and a tattered tired soul
that one devastating lie kept me blind.
When I fell, I broke…
shattered to shards…to bits.
reality wavered… forgotten…
in a sudden flash I lost all grip.
When I fell, you grinned.
Karma found its way back around to me…
Devastating…ravaging… horrifying
Was the lie ever real to you like it was to me?
© bipolarmuse 2012
This is my life through poetry, quotes, and my journal. The intense ride of my ups and downs of life ...and the relentless mood disorders I suffer from.
That was a good one
July 13, 2012 at 11:00 AM
Thank you.
July 13, 2012 at 3:53 PM
You’re welcome
July 14, 2012 at 2:05 AM
oh man that puts me back to when I had the same question. Very beautiful sweety.
July 13, 2012 at 12:59 PM
Thank you Carlarenee… glad you liked it. ♥
July 13, 2012 at 3:54 PM
Hmmmm….this was thought provoking…..I could ask the same question of certain events in my own life…..really liked your train of thought here….nicely done!
Celeste
hugs xoxo
July 13, 2012 at 2:04 PM
Thank you Celeste… ♥
July 13, 2012 at 3:55 PM
Tag, you’re it. http://undoingcrazy.wordpress.com/2012/07/06/missing-blogging-and-a-game/
July 14, 2012 at 7:30 AM
Hers is the heart where the dagger still sticks
Piercing the flesh with no chance to fix
It
Hers is the soul in pieces- born new
While blood runs from skin that the blade punched
Through
Hers is a mind which we all adore
Battered and bruised and trapped behind the
Door
This sinking feeling- why do I know it?
It’s like I’m falling but can’t yet show it
She says it’s okay but I see in her eyes
When that monster shouts
A part of her dies
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Thanks for the inspiration, and for sharing another beautiful, sad poem, Bipolarmuse… <3
I must be in a somber mood today. I was going to write an answering poem filled with hope to refute the darkness and it just ended up lamenting it instead. For shame!
Oh well. Enjoy anyway, I guess?? <3 I couldn't think of a title.
<3s,
Eris
July 16, 2012 at 7:54 AM
I absolutely love this poem you put here… you have such a wonderful gift… Sad is usually how I roll but I too try to followup with something lighter. ♥ Good to hear from you Eris.
July 16, 2012 at 11:35 AM
Muse, yet again you knock me over with your raw and powerful text. It’s passionate and wild but at the same time, artistic, exquisite. You are a writer.
July 16, 2012 at 10:33 AM
Thank you Thomas… that is such a wonderful compliment.
I love to write and am happy when I can share it with others. ♥
July 16, 2012 at 11:41 AM
One of my favourite poems of yours
July 17, 2012 at 6:16 AM
Thank you very much Miss Alexandrina ♥
July 17, 2012 at 7:58 AM
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