After Tonight
Hushed words and gentle lips.
We dance in magnetism…
Enchanting, magical, rare.
A million thoughts, new beginnings…
Eyes so innocent, intensely stare.
My outside world vanishes…
Focused only on you, on passion.
Your lips softly whisper my name…
Each letter drops and takes flight…
Awakens this heat… ignites this flame.
After tonight, will you remember my name?
© bipolarmuse 2012
This is my life through poetry, quotes, and my journal. The intense ride of my ups and downs of life ...and the relentless mood disorders I suffer from.
WOW ……I’m sitting here trying to summon words to let you know how much I like this , I can’t come up with any…. just plain awesome….
Tim
July 18, 2012 at 6:50 PM
Thank you Tim! I am glad you liked it.
July 18, 2012 at 6:54 PM
July 18, 2012 at 6:59 PM
Reblogged this on timzauto…. in search of the blond haired kid.
July 18, 2012 at 7:45 PM
Thank you for the reblog.
July 19, 2012 at 10:52 AM
your welcome …everyone loves this …
July 19, 2012 at 10:52 AM
Morning’s Glory
–
After last night
I remember your name
I remember the love and the heat of the flame
I remember your heart and I’ve a piece of your soul
Nestled within me
Life within me
A souvenir of that moment under stars
Under lights
Together we danced
Do dance
Now the flame
Cooled to ashes but burning still
An ember
A piece of those stars
Fusing us
Holding us
Pulling us together
Electric and dangerous
I want more of this
Feeling
From you
Let’s be more than just
A name
Written out on skin
Under stars and sky
Slowly turning to day
In the heat and the fray
Of morning’s glory.
–
Have an answering poem, if you please~ <3 (If you don't, just tell me!) I love the way you weave your words. Reading them let mine flow from me. Thank you for sharing your gift and inspiration. It's always so lovely the way they form such clear images in my mind. I can feel the heat from that poem. It's beautiful.
<3<3s,
Eris
July 18, 2012 at 8:58 PM
Thank you Eris. I love your poem here.. it is a most wonderful complimenting piece. Your style and use of words is superb. I absolutely love it. ♥ Thank you for sharing this. ♥
July 19, 2012 at 10:56 AM
How flattering! I love Eris. ; ))
July 24, 2012 at 8:34 PM
As do I…
July 24, 2012 at 11:06 PM
Beautiful poem. I love the imagery of the phrase, “Each letter drops and takes flight…” I can see the letters falling off his lips. Wonderful!
July 18, 2012 at 9:29 PM
Thank you very much! I appreciate your feedback and I am glad you enjoyed it. ♥
July 19, 2012 at 10:57 AM
You are welcome.
July 19, 2012 at 8:01 PM
I think he will.. at least I would
July 18, 2012 at 11:52 PM
July 19, 2012 at 10:58 AM
very nice muse and it’s interaction with the muse and of its passion:)
July 19, 2012 at 2:53 AM
Thank you Don… I really enjoy this piece more and more as I read it.
July 19, 2012 at 10:58 AM
Romantic….forgetting everything else. Fixated on the task at hand. ; ))
July 19, 2012 at 5:59 AM
Exactly!!
July 19, 2012 at 11:21 AM
A good read, as usual
July 19, 2012 at 6:57 AM
Thanks TPG… I am glad you liked it. ♥
July 19, 2012 at 11:21 AM
Ah! Very wise a question!!
July 19, 2012 at 8:47 AM
LOL, yes it is.
July 19, 2012 at 11:21 AM
I get lost in your words each time I stop over … breath taking.
July 19, 2012 at 11:51 AM
Thank you! That’s an awesome compliment. ♥
July 19, 2012 at 11:59 AM
so poetic! great!!!
July 19, 2012 at 12:14 PM
Thanks so very much. Glad you stopped by to read. ♥
July 19, 2012 at 12:15 PM
you’re welcome! Good Job and I’ll check yours so often.
July 19, 2012 at 12:17 PM
Please do!
July 19, 2012 at 12:18 PM
Sure will! God Bless and You will always be blessed!
July 19, 2012 at 12:21 PM
yes! beautiful!!!
July 19, 2012 at 4:11 PM
Thank you Linda ♥
July 20, 2012 at 12:06 PM
Reblogged this on onlinefunland and commented:
Great !
July 23, 2012 at 7:54 PM
A beautiful article.
July 24, 2012 at 8:10 PM