34 comments on “After Tonight

  1. WOW ……I’m sitting here trying to summon words to let you know how much I like this , I can’t come up with any…. just plain awesome…. :) Tim

  2. Morning’s Glory

    After last night
    I remember your name
    I remember the love and the heat of the flame
    I remember your heart and I’ve a piece of your soul
    Nestled within me
    Life within me

    A souvenir of that moment under stars
    Under lights
    Together we danced
    Do dance
    Now the flame
    Cooled to ashes but burning still
    An ember
    A piece of those stars
    Fusing us
    Holding us
    Pulling us together

    Electric and dangerous
    I want more of this
    Feeling
    From you
    Let’s be more than just
    A name
    Written out on skin
    Under stars and sky
    Slowly turning to day
    In the heat and the fray
    Of morning’s glory.

    Have an answering poem, if you please~ <3 (If you don't, just tell me!) I love the way you weave your words. Reading them let mine flow from me. Thank you for sharing your gift and inspiration. It's always so lovely the way they form such clear images in my mind. I can feel the heat from that poem. It's beautiful.

    <3<3s,
    Eris

  3. Beautiful poem. I love the imagery of the phrase, “Each letter drops and takes flight…” I can see the letters falling off his lips. Wonderful! :)

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