A Poetic Memoir Of My Journey Through Life

If Ever I’m Alone With You


If ever I’m alone with you…

Those sweet luscious lips,

Your deep lustful eyes.

One smoldering kiss…

Guaranteed, you WILL be mine.

~

If ever I’m alone with you…

Just touch me softly “here”,

Stroke me deeply “there”.

Whisper to me your moans,

As you pull back on my hair.

~

If ever I’m alone with you…

Carry me off to the moon,

 Then bring me crashing down.

Teach me all that you like…

I promise to turn your world…

                                Upside Down.

~

If ever I’m alone with you.

© bipolarmuse 2012

24 Responses

  1. very good muse:)) definitely two-fold on this one. but it certainly can cause breathing issues…hahaha

    August 8, 2012 at 6:38 PM

    • LOL, I am testing out this side of who I am. I have never really written poems of this nature and I am getting a little more comfortable with it each try. ♥

      August 8, 2012 at 6:41 PM

      • i think this is like your second or third i’ve seen from you. i’ve got a few like that as well. but you are leaving quite the sensuals. you are doing a wonderful job with them. you will certainly have my attention even if they cause my breathing problems….:))…hahahaha

        August 8, 2012 at 6:45 PM

      • ;) Glad you like them.

        August 8, 2012 at 8:27 PM

  2. rachel

    Nice!

    August 8, 2012 at 6:52 PM

    • Thank you!

      August 8, 2012 at 8:27 PM

  3. Romantic, passionate and sensual…just beautiful! :)

    August 8, 2012 at 8:57 PM

    • Thank you… I like doing these types. I was a little uncomfortable stepping out of my shell a bit but I am glad I have. xo ♥

      August 9, 2012 at 9:38 AM

      • I’ve done a few, too, and it’s always fun to step out of the box, but it is uncomfortable, too, until you do more and more! Keep it up! Hugs! xo

        August 9, 2012 at 11:03 AM

  4. Strictly for the adults!
    Beautiful and passionate!
    If ever I’m alone with you.
    Maybe I’ll reserve it for when I’m grown!
    Smiles!
    Or is this just the right time…?
    I like it!

    August 8, 2012 at 11:11 PM

    • :-D I am glad you enjoyed it. ♥

      August 9, 2012 at 9:39 AM

  5. A very passionate piece. I liked it!

    August 9, 2012 at 1:48 AM

    • Thank you. :) I am stepping a little more out of my comfort zone and I am liking it. ♥

      August 9, 2012 at 9:40 AM

  6. Kharma

    I think “love” is your thing, girl. You’re a natural.

    August 9, 2012 at 9:36 AM

    • Thank you Kharma… I need to go catch up on your blog. :)

      August 9, 2012 at 9:43 AM

  7. Superb solitary sensuality, Muse x

    August 9, 2012 at 12:55 PM

    • Thank you Martin. Glad you liked it. I like your gravatar picture. ♥

      August 10, 2012 at 8:39 AM

      • Why thank you, Muse *smiles* :)

        August 10, 2012 at 3:34 PM

  8. August 9, 2012 at 6:54 PM

    • LOL, Great song choice!!! How did you know I am a hip-hop fan?? I love these spoofs…
      LOL, the best 30 seconds of my life!!! Bahahaha

      August 10, 2012 at 8:58 AM

  9. Oh, la la! Sensual … dreamy … did I say, sensual? Love this! :) xoxox

    August 10, 2012 at 11:54 AM

    • Thank you! I enjoyed writing it. ♥

      August 10, 2012 at 1:42 PM

  10. I just adore this lady muse…so fiery, dreamy and intimate…I like whole heartedly! Sigh…..Very nice job and bravo to your creative genius….. ; )
    xoxo
    Celeste

    August 13, 2012 at 7:58 AM

    • Thank you… :) I am glad you enjoyed it.

      August 13, 2012 at 8:31 AM

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