A Poetic Memoir Of My Journey Through Life

Undressed


Lustful watching eyes

Undress me from head to toe

Yet I can see more

© bipolarmuse 2012

12 Responses

  1. Follow my blog and feel free to read my poems. By the way lovely poem

    August 22, 2012 at 10:01 PM

    • Thank you! I did indeed go to your blog and follow you. You have some great writes. ♥

      August 23, 2012 at 6:04 AM

  2. Lovely Haiku, Muse :) xox

    August 22, 2012 at 11:12 PM

    • Thank you Julie. ♥

      August 23, 2012 at 6:05 AM

  3. love it muse!! definitely the muse in action here – clarified as the voice. is two-fold of course – more than a physical presense.

    August 23, 2012 at 2:57 AM

    • Exactly! You hit the nail on the head. This one came to me so readily… had to share it. ♥

      August 23, 2012 at 6:08 AM

  4. Wonderful! This will stick with me for a while.

    August 23, 2012 at 8:36 AM

    • Thank you… I am glad you liked it. I have really gotten addicted to the Haiku format.

      August 23, 2012 at 8:58 AM

  5. The image and the haiku are so evocative.

    Thanks for sharing your stunning work with all of us, Muse.

    Tom

    August 23, 2012 at 9:19 AM

  6. Kharma

    Oooooooh…..sexy, girl!

    August 23, 2012 at 11:48 AM

  7. Oh yes…..Love the unspoken meaning here….more indeed! :) Gorgeous……
    and love the photo, I envy her eye color…..
    Celeste
    xo

    August 24, 2012 at 5:42 AM

    • Her eyes are amazing aren’t they?? That is what grasped me most about the picture.

      August 24, 2012 at 9:04 AM

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