Lost In You
Shadows on your skin…
I watch you
as you watch me.
The light from the tv,
brightens and darkens
the room
yet I never lose sight of you.
Your eyes, they hold mine.
I bite my lip, yours hold a smile.
I could go on like this…
travel miles and miles.
Your warm skin, pressed firmly
to mine.
Lets get lost…
Let us stop time.
Kisses, tender and sweet…
one, two, 20 more.
My heart pounds for what’s
in store.
You speak, I melt.
You command, I listen,
I do…
but only for you.
Palm to palm…
fingers intertwined
Fingers locked.
Every moment, of every day…
I could tangle up
and get lost in you.
and I do…
In every way.
Tangled up
…
lost in you
…
Only you
…
© bipolarmuse 2012
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This is my life through poetry, quotes, and my journal. The intense ride of my ups and downs of life ...and the relentless mood disorders I suffer from.
wow that is such a beautiful poem!
August 27, 2012 at 5:03 PM
Thank you so very much Rachel. I am happy that you enjoyed it.
August 27, 2012 at 5:04 PM
you should get it published somehow. definitely copyright it
August 27, 2012 at 5:05 PM
Thank you! That is such a wonderful compliment to my work. ♥
August 27, 2012 at 5:06 PM
very very good muse. that has a lot of sparkle all the way through it.:)
August 27, 2012 at 5:07 PM
Thank you Don.
I have been a little silent lately… been very busy with life.
I really love this poem… I was hoping it had a sparkle throughout it.
August 27, 2012 at 5:09 PM
anytime muse. know what ya mean as to being busy. if ya got a free moment, ya just might like my latest. keyword is hummingbird:)
August 27, 2012 at 5:24 PM
great work! I am beginning to think that you have some big passionate romance going on lol,
August 27, 2012 at 6:02 PM
August 28, 2012 at 9:31 AM
August 28, 2012 at 9:31 AM
Reblogged this on Call Me Normal.
August 27, 2012 at 7:31 PM
Ohhhhhhhhhhhh my, that was beautifully done! It was perfectly spellbinding to say the very least. It left my thoughtfuly daydreaming, breathing just a little heavier and with a sort of meloncholly that only you would understand from our past correspondence.
I would like to share something with you that I think you jus might enjoy http://darkquill.wordpress.com/2010/09/01/bliss/ and http://darkquill.wordpress.com/2010/08/29/linear-thoughts/ if it is koscher to do such a thing.
I hope you like those peices and do not mind my blatantly throuwing them into your comment section. I am still trying to learn the rules to this place/
August 28, 2012 at 7:59 AM
Thank you for the links! I appreciate that you do that because I have lacked time to read much…so I thank you.
I am glad you liked the poem… and I understand your comment too well my friend.
I am off to red your links. ♥
August 28, 2012 at 9:35 AM
Muse, lush and lyrical- staggeringly romantic. Just tweeted it on. Tom
August 28, 2012 at 9:38 AM
Thank you Tom. I am glad that this piece touched you. It indeed touches on a very real aspect of my life that I am sharing.
Thank you for the re-tweet. I found you and am following you as well.
August 28, 2012 at 9:49 AM
You write, I melt.
August 28, 2012 at 10:20 AM
Thank you… I like that!
August 28, 2012 at 11:07 AM
I find myself smiling without even realizing it while reading this:) Lovely piece.
August 28, 2012 at 10:36 AM
Thank you Bethany… reactions to poetry are always a great sign. ♥
August 28, 2012 at 11:08 AM
Exquisite, Muse, beautifully exquisite xxx
August 28, 2012 at 12:35 PM
Thank you so much Martin. ♥
August 29, 2012 at 6:17 AM
Hi Miss Muse xx
No rules Just Luv xoxoxoxoxoxo
all the best and thx for the funnnnnnnnn summer
http://catforsley.me/2012/08/29/no-rules-award-thank-you-summer-hearts-xo-cat-forsley/
August 29, 2012 at 4:04 PM
Thank you Cat!! I am honored!!
xoxo ♥
August 29, 2012 at 6:09 PM
Those words took me to my past life!!!! It’s true !!!!
August 29, 2012 at 9:50 PM
So glad you could relate! Thank you for following my blog…
August 31, 2012 at 8:20 AM
Awwww. This is sweet. Mr. must have quite the hold on your heart.
August 31, 2012 at 9:26 AM
Yes he does. ♥
August 31, 2012 at 3:07 PM
when i saw this, i certainly assumed another was in mind when you posted this piece. it’s nice when one has created an effect on you:)
August 31, 2012 at 3:31 PM
Thank you Don… I certainly have a muse of my own.
September 1, 2012 at 4:03 PM
I wanted to be there!
September 1, 2012 at 6:19 PM
Awesome!! Glad you liked it and you could feel it.
September 2, 2012 at 11:50 AM
Wow!
*heads off to deeply kiss wife*
September 1, 2012 at 8:46 PM
Guapo! Thank you for compliment… hope you got that kiss.
September 2, 2012 at 11:51 AM
Thanks for the positive memory—Ahhh, I do remember when…
September 3, 2012 at 7:08 AM