A Poetic Memoir Of My Journey Through Life

Here On Earth With Me ~ Blackout Poem


Imagine being away from you.

Excruciating, painful.

I will take all that I can get.

Similar souls…

Under the dark sky,

In awe with you.

My love growing, untamed.

Under the shimmering stars…melt together.

Adoration…

Fallen for you.

Tears in my eyes,

I want you happy.

I love

thinking

more about you than I thought

was possible.

I love you

unconditionally.

Grace.

Wonderfully perfect.

Spoil me.

Your “everything”…

Love incarnate…

makes me ache.

Makes me fucking melt.

Beautiful view…

riding…

Palms to palms… hard embrace…

fingers intertwined and locked.

Look up at the stars and moon…

realize heaven does not exist in the celestial body

but here on earth…

with me.

Will never let you go.

© bipolarmuse 2012

** Blackout poem taken from letters written back and forth between myself and a wonderfully amazing man that has shown me a whole new world.**

21 Responses

  1. Kimberly

    Amazing…………

    August 31, 2012 at 8:10 AM

    • Thank you very much. :) I am glad you enjoyed it.

      August 31, 2012 at 8:11 AM

  2. do you share these wonderful intense with you love incarnate? Seems like great foreplay (giggle). You express your passion so well, so real. Lets the reader know that you know what you are writing about! ;-)

    August 31, 2012 at 8:25 AM

    • Thank you! The emails back and forth are great foreplay. He is an amazing guy… so it comes easy. ♥

      August 31, 2012 at 8:36 AM

      • enjoy yourself! You deserve it more than anyone!!! If he ever does anything hurtful, just let me know and I will set him straight lol! ;-)

        August 31, 2012 at 8:47 AM

      • LOL… :)

        August 31, 2012 at 3:06 PM

  3. Beautiful, enjoy the magic of new love. xx

    August 31, 2012 at 10:09 AM

    • Thank you, I certainly am enjoying every moment. ♥

      August 31, 2012 at 3:08 PM

  4. August 31, 2012 at 12:25 PM

    • Awesome song!

      August 31, 2012 at 3:11 PM

      • Isn’t it? I like ATB. He’s got one more that I like – but I think I’ve showed you before. Could You Believe?

        August 31, 2012 at 3:27 PM

  5. very nice muse and sure is a soaker:))

    August 31, 2012 at 4:33 PM

    • Thank you! Glad you liked it. ♥

      September 1, 2012 at 4:04 PM

      • anytime muse. i left you a comment on one of your pics on FB too. i’ll have to eventually fill you in on my angle as to a femme:)

        September 1, 2012 at 4:15 PM

      • Cool! I will go check out your comment. :)

        September 1, 2012 at 4:16 PM

      • anytime…and if you got time, which i don’t know, you might like a piece i wrote called “fill the void” as it has a little family history to it. way different from what you have seen:)

        September 1, 2012 at 4:20 PM

      • I will definitely check that out soon… for sure by Tuesday. :)

        September 2, 2012 at 11:50 AM

  6. Steamy piece to say the least!

    September 1, 2012 at 9:38 AM

    • Thanks TPG! I need to go catch up on your blog… hope to do that by Tuesday. ♥

      September 2, 2012 at 11:54 AM

  7. you really get to the core. the passion in your words-i know what you feel but it always seems to be in a fantasy. the object of my affection are real but must keep the words mostly in my head or in cryptic poems. one who i feel this way about knows my love. it can never happen but it fires up my muse and explodes on the page. your passion defintely does the same. your poem coming from those intense letters captures the depth. did you ever have a relationship where the phone replaced the pen and paper. In my way younger days, it could get pretty mind blowing. anyway, i just stopped by to listen again to your video and ended up definitely downloading the mp3. after i work some things out in my haiku i think i am going to take my poetry and writing in a totally different direction. might be good for my soul. thanks. your poem and you are an inpsiration. jen ♥

    September 1, 2012 at 11:15 PM

    • That is awesome! I am excited to see what direction your poems will take. My latest poems are certainly very person… my muse keeps me wanting and needing more. I am not use to writing this subject matter but it comes so easy with him. ♥

      September 2, 2012 at 11:57 AM

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