21 comments on “Here On Earth With Me ~ Blackout Poem

  1. do you share these wonderful intense with you love incarnate? Seems like great foreplay (giggle). You express your passion so well, so real. Lets the reader know that you know what you are writing about! ;-)


  2. you really get to the core. the passion in your words-i know what you feel but it always seems to be in a fantasy. the object of my affection are real but must keep the words mostly in my head or in cryptic poems. one who i feel this way about knows my love. it can never happen but it fires up my muse and explodes on the page. your passion defintely does the same. your poem coming from those intense letters captures the depth. did you ever have a relationship where the phone replaced the pen and paper. In my way younger days, it could get pretty mind blowing. anyway, i just stopped by to listen again to your video and ended up definitely downloading the mp3. after i work some things out in my haiku i think i am going to take my poetry and writing in a totally different direction. might be good for my soul. thanks. your poem and you are an inpsiration. jen ♥


    • That is awesome! I am excited to see what direction your poems will take. My latest poems are certainly very person… my muse keeps me wanting and needing more. I am not use to writing this subject matter but it comes so easy with him. ♥


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